Part Six                 



                                           ANOTHER POINT OF VIEW


                                                       Chapter Ten


                                                          The Bar

This is a pivotal chapter that develops not only the plot the but the theme of the novel.

Taking advantage of the third person form, the chapter is told from Bret Taylor’s point of view.  It starts with a flashback when he got out of Paula’s car.  Brett takes the first of many of his taxi journeys, this one to the (wait for it) . . .  Golden Sunset Café.  From the impossibly detailed newspaper clippings given him by Klifter, Bret knows that Lorraine was last seen alive drinking at this bar by a bartender named Rollins.  The bartender is not there, so Bret settles down to drink and wait.

In a passage not critical to the action, Bret looks around the room and notes a flashy young man in a back booth who briefly looks at him, then looks away.  This is Miles, who has just described the same moment from his own perspective at the end of the preceding chapter.  Macdonald will execute several of these doublings, and I think this is part of what Peter Wolfe had in mind when he talked about the “shrewd literary judgment” associated with Macdonald’s use of the shifting third person point of view. If you read slowly enough to notice, the doublings add a sense of realism to the action.


                                    Movie Recommendations at No Extra Charge

For those of you who are moviegoers, the French-Polish Three Colours trilogy (1993-9994) makes good use of repeating the same scene from the standpoint of different participants.


                          The Fight in the Bar (Because That’s What Happens in Bars)

While Taylor waits, he is drawn into a long conversation with a warrant officer about a friend of the warrant officer who has an unfaithful wife.  It’s a long story, in the course of which both Bret and the warrant officer become very drunk.  The wife in the story was very passionate and satisfied the warrant officer’s friend in every way; but when the sailor went off on long deployments, she was unfaithful.  His friend is now back from the war, furious about her betrayals, and the warrant officer asks what he should tell his friend to do.  Specifically, he says that his friend is so angry he’s afraid he will beat her to death.

A million similar stories were playing out in the aftermath of the war, and Brett pays little attention.  He only listens because he feels it would be rude to snub an enlisted man.  But once the warrant officer is finished, it gets interesting.

  • When Bret asks if the man’s friend was faithful to his wife during the war, the warrant officer explodes, wondering what that has to do with it. But he admits that his friend wasn’t faithful.
  • When Bret questions him further, he admits that he is talking about himself and his own wife.
  • Brett scolds him for his double standard and tells him to go home to his wife and apologize.
  • The warrant officer is in no mood to have his feminist consciousness raised. He starts screaming abuse at Brett, although he is just sober enough to avoid the court martial offense of striking a commissioned officer.
  • The alcohol gets the better of Brett and he gives the man a hard shove in his face, knocking the warrant officer backwards onto the barroom floor. He comes up ready for a fight and Taylor knocks him down with a quick series of punches, learned in his boxing days.
  • The bartender knocks Brett out with a blow to the back of the head with a bottle.


                                                            Chapter Eleven

Macdonald shifts the point of view back to Miles, who decides impulsively to take advantage of the opportunity.  Assuring the bartender that he is a friend of the unconscious officer, Miles takes Taylor to his home and puts him to bed.  Taylor wakes up long enough to be sick.  Miles introduces himself, using a false name on the off-chance his real name might mean something to Taylor.  When Miles offers to let Taylor sleep it off at his house, Taylor is understandably cautious.  Then he decides that Miles is just a Good Samaritan and accepts the offer.  The chapter ends with Taylor going back to sleep and Miles heading out to keep the appointment with Paula to get his promised two thousand dollars to get out of town.


                                        Another Fine Mess You’ve Gotten Us Into

At the end of the chapter (which is also the end of the third section of the book) the book is dead in the water as a mystery but damned exciting as a thriller.

  • Miles knows who Taylor is, but not whether he knows anything. Paula has not shared Taylor’s amnesia with Miles.
  • Taylor is sleeping in Miles’ house and has no idea Miles has anything to do with his search.
  • Whatever Miles’ involvement is, it seems unlikely that he killed Lorraine since he is going out of his way to court contact with Taylor.
  • Paula has lost control of the situation. It’s just not clear what the situation is.







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