Part Seven                      



                                                THE INVESTIGATION BEGINS!


                                                        Well, it begins to begin . . .

Chapter Eleven ended with Miles going to meet Paula.  However, whatever happened is hidden from the reader for the moment.  Odd for a mystery but par for the course in a thriller.

Chapter Twelve, the first chapter of Part IV, Doomsday, relates the morning after the bar fight. Taylor is eager to continue his investigation.  Taylor and Miles have a strained conversation. They are each getting on each other’s nerves, though for different reasons.  Taylor is understandably suspicious of Miles’ generosity. Miles has seen that Taylor’s pockets are stuffed with the newspaper clippings about Lorraine’s murder, and he is starting to question whether having contact with Taylor was a good idea after all.  It’s so unfortunate that no one warned Miles to stay away from the Golden Sunset café and to avoid Taylor at all costs.

Miles convinces Taylor that his uniform is too torn and dirty to be worn and persuades Taylor to wear some clothes of his own instead.  Although Taylor feels uncomfortable in Miles’ stylish clothes, he admits that the two of them are the same size and that the clothes fit him well.  Several commentators have noted this as symbolic that Miles is an alter ego. Taylor took the high road, seeking credentials and respectability; Miles took the low road, living by his wits in a variety of shady ways.

The chapter ends with Miles taking Taylor’s uniform to the tailor shop.  Miles’ confidence is returning and he plans to keep the deception going, although what he hopes to gain is clear neither to the reader nor to himself.

When he returns to the apartment Taylor is gone, leaving a note thanking him and saying he will be back.


                                                             Picking a Nit

There is a small confusion in the point of view in this chapter; at the start we are privy to Taylor’s thoughts and then we are getting the thoughts of Miles.  It has no consequence to the narrative.


               This Time We’re Really, Really Going to Investigate This Murder, I Promise!

When Taylor finally gets down to business, he is an impressive detective.  As he remarks, he gets as much done in a day as the LAPD did in nine months.  Taylor’s talent is a peculiarly effective combination of bribery and threats.  It’s convincing even though we know he has no investigative experience.  It works because we believe that Taylor wants to know so badly.

  • The bartender he is looking for shows up while Taylor is having breakfast at the Golden Sunset. After enough twenties change hands, the bartender gives Taylor the name of the man who left the bar with Lorraine that night, Burton Garth.
  • Garth is a bar owner himself. As a married man, he is vulnerable to Taylor’s threats of blackmail.  Garth admits he took Lorraine home the night of the murder but insists he never got inside.  He acknowledges that Lorraine was pretty drunk.  As they were going up the porch steps, a big, well-dressed man ran out of the house, pushed Lorraine aside, and hit Garth so hard that Garth requires stiches.  Garth said that he fled at that point and never saw Lorraine again.
  • Suspicious, Taylor drags Garth to the doctor who he claims gave him the stiches that night. The doctor confirms Garth’s story.
  • Taylor goes to the house he had purchased for himself and Lorraine, which was also the scene of the murder. Lorraine’s parents are living in the house; Paula had arranged to rent it to them rather than have it sit vacant while Taylor was hospitalized.
  • Lorraine’s parents are stereotypes of hillbillies; Macdonald lays on their lack of education, unsanitary habits, and general ignorance with a thick trowel. In fairness, he grants Lorraine’s mother a sense of generosity and sympathy to Taylor for his own loss.
  • With all the cues, Taylor’s memory of Lorraine returns. (Thank you so much, Dr. Wright, for wasting nine months.)
  • Taylor’s feelings about Lorraine mirror the story told in the bar by the warrant officer. She loved Taylor and helped him achieve, for the first time, a sexual relationship.  But, to use the modern phrasing, when Taylor was away it was a nonexclusive relationship on her part.  He finds that he cannot hate her for that, referring to her infidelities as “light sins.” He is angry at himself for marrying such a shallow person but he recognizes that the responsibility is his.







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